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		<title>Untilted Vampire Story &#8212; possibly &#8220;The Jasmine Ashes&#8221;??</title>
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		<description><![CDATA[Beginning of a vampire story, comments and thoughts wanted about the story and plot so far, is it worth continuing??<img alt="" border="0" src="http://stats.wordpress.com/b.gif?host=vampericangel.wordpress.com&amp;blog=6462330&amp;post=1&amp;subd=vampericangel&amp;ref=&amp;feed=1" width="1" height="1" />]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hey just wondering if someone would please read through this story and comment their thoughts on it thanks</p>
<p>Vamperic_Angel</p>
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<p>  CHAPTER 1<br />
About 16 years ago, my Mother gave birth to an outcast.<br />
Ever since I was young I never fitted in with the other gilrs, they would comb their dolls hair while I would set it alight,<br />
I never liked wearing dresses or skirts and staying up all night talking about which guy i liked in school and which one I would go to the prom with,<br />
and while they dreamed of becoming models, I dreamed of becoming the supernatural, something that most likely only existed in my mind.<br />
Thats how I became someone that was not be wanted,<br />
another person that the world was going to tell that they were nothing and never will acheive to be anything else but nothing.<br />
Well the world&#8217;s words are correct because here I am another little nobody,<br />
and when i become a woman ill still be nothing,<br />
that birth 16 years ago,<br />
was given to me,<br />
Jasmine.</p>
<p>The 3:00 pm finish bell for school just rang,<br />
and like usuall i was the first to leave,<br />
i grabbed my black do-it-yourself hand fashioned bag,<br />
and went down the dull gray school halls of Blackwood High.<br />
I tried to get home as fast as i could so i went down S.Pennsylvania Avenue,<br />
But before i could get home i was caught by Vanessa, the school &#8220;bully&#8221;,<br />
she was tall, dark and mean, she looked almost like a man, with steriod grown muscels, and her face looked like a dropped pie,<br />
she rode an old motorcycle; that looked younger than she did; even though she was underage,<br />
and she scared even grown man, and now she was after me.</p>
<p>I ran, and ran, but she caught me. She told me get on, and so i would not get hurt i did what she said to,<br />
we went down a street i had never been down before,<br />
we arrived to a old abandonded building, one that should have been demolished a century or two ago,<br />
but the government never really cared, or never had gotten to it.<br />
There was other people there, people who were not in our grade let alone our school,<br />
they looked like they were college students, but not one of them said a word,<br />
could they even speake at all, and then one of them finally said something.<br />
It was in a mumbled, low and gruntal voice, but by the way he had said it,<br />
it was perfectly clear, the time for fun and games were over,<br />
they had enough of playing around with their prey,<br />
and they were ready to do something i did not even know was humanly possible,<br />
they were flying. Flying in circles around me,<br />
their eyes had changed from a normal coloured iris,<br />
to a black circle, so that the pupils were not visable,<br />
before when i had seen Vanessa i was scared,<br />
but now i was petrified,<br />
they whispered to each other, and hissed at me, and two of their top-front teeth, had grown to a point.</p>
<p>Is it possible for vampires to exist?<br />
no it couldn&#8217;t be possible, they only existed in ghost stories or very old legdens<br />
but it might be possible, they were flying right in front of my eyes,<br />
and their teeth were sharp to the point like a vampire,<br />
this could not be real, it must be a dream.<br />
I told myself to close my eyes, and ill wake up and see that this is all a dream.<br />
But before i could, Vanessa grabbed me, and her and her team of &#8220;bullies&#8221; took me on one of their flying trips,<br />
they took me out on the street, but not just on the street; they took me 50 feet off the ground, and then she let me go,<br />
she dropped me out on the street. And the next thing i knew i found myself in the hospital,<br />
asking if anyone knew me, but they all ignored me,<br />
why would they all ignore me? were they given orders to?<br />
i wanted to know what had happen to me,<br />
but no-one would tell me,<br />
no-one was even here to come and see if i was okay,<br />
yeah my pearents were in South East Asia,<br />
but still no-one?</p>
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<p>  CHAPTER 2<br />
&#8220;How did I get here?&#8221; All i remember was being in a hospital when Dr.Rinsdale showed up.<br />
I was dying,<br />
almost completely gone,<br />
Dr.Rinsdale has being trying to explain the techniqual language of &#8216;the doctor&#8217;,<br />
he said I had some problem with my blood cells, porphyria.<br />
He said he had never seen it this bad before, I had never seen it before,<br />
but I knew I was different,<br />
I knew I was not the same any more,<br />
that everything I knew in my life, had changed.<br />
Dr. Rinsdale, insisted that i should rest, and the his insistant seemed to agree,<br />
I protested that it was not needed, but they left me to rest,<br />
I didnt feel tired, i didnt feel sick, I fealt strong.<br />
I reached for the mirror on the beside table, when I looked I saw that my skin had changed from a mediterranean tan,<br />
to a pale white, almost ghost-like.<br />
So as they had insisted I tried to rest, I tried to close my eyes and sleep but I couldnt,<br />
I opened the bedside table&#8217;s draw to get my ipod,<br />
but I found a folder instead,<br />
it said my parents had died on a trip back home from South East Asia,<br />
it also said that Dr.Rinsdale was now my adoptive father,<br />
and that I would be moving to New York.<br />
I knew nothing about New York, except for what I read in books,<br />
and what I had seen in the cinema&#8217;s,<br />
I had so many questions that I wanted answered,<br />
but there was only one person who could answer my questions, Dr.Rinsdale.<br />
How was it that my life had such a major turn-around?<br />
why did he pick me, out of all the other people around me?<br />
He knew something about me, something that i might not even know about myself,<br />
and if anyone could tell me the &#8216;secret&#8217;, that is me,<br />
that Dr.Rinsdale is hiding from me,<br />
it was him, him alone, and I was ready to find-out the truth.<br />
I just had to get out of here first, leave my past life behind, and prepare myself for the next one.<br />
I was having a craving, it was stirring up inside of me, I could hear voice&#8217;s but no one was speaking.<br />
What was going on, that smell, I couldn&#8217;t resist it, it was strong, like a drug, equiping me, stirring me,<br />
pulling me towards it, a smell I did not know, it was calling me, it was hard to resist a smell so beautiful,<br />
but I had to resist, it wasnt a good smell, it wasnt a bad smell, but it called me, like a deer calling the lion.</p>
<p>As i followed it, I heard and Saw Dr. Rinsdale talking to a group of people.<br />
&#8220;What did you want me to do let her die, i found her with her head cracked open,<br />
she dropped fifty feet, you would have done the same thing, so dont accuse me for saving her life&#8221; Dr. Rinsdale was firm in his words but how did he know these people.<br />
&#8220;Yeah you could have let her die, but no you wanted to create another one of us, another monster,<br />
You know how dangerous she&#8217;s become know, dont expect me to look after her, she was your choice to save,<br />
and i wont be responsible if she creates an uproar for our family, father&#8221; The Boy&#8217;s words was just as strong as his fathers,<br />
but that now meant that he was now my brother. I needed to run back to my room, before Dr. Rinsdale notice&#8217;s i have left it in the first place.<br />
Dr.Rinsdale returned, and insisted that we had to leave, that we had outstood our welcome,<br />
and that it was urgent that we left right then and there. But it was just us that left, the boy i had seen did not leave with us, and i did not see him anywhere in the hospital when we left.<br />
I started asking my question, however he said that the questions would have to wait. That he would answer them, once we were alone.</p>
<p>First we went to Pheonix before we returned to my new home.<br />
Pheonix was a place of a beautiful nature, a place were beautiful, wonderful, yet strange things were answered,<br />
my questions were to be answered then and there.<br />
First of all I asked him what &#8220;cutaneous porphyria&#8221; was, he tried to explain it in a language that I could understand,<br />
he said it was a blood cell disease and that it primarly affected the skin, and caused the teeth in the gums to grow to a point.<br />
He was right about the affects to the skin, especially with my tan dissappering, but the thing about the teeth,<br />
I had not had such an experience with it just yet.<br />
He asked me if I had any other questions, so i asked him, why he had choosen me, he became histerical at the question,<br />
he cleared his throat, then answered &#8220;I did not pick you my child, I just found you, dying, so I saved you,<br />
there are many things that will need to be explained but I believe you will be able to understand them in time.&#8221;<br />
&#8220;Now is that all you want to know?&#8221; he asked me for the second-time, i had so many more questions but out of all of them,<br />
one question could not wait.</p>
<p>So i asked. &#8220;What happened to my parents? How did they die?&#8221;, at this his swerv smile, faded away.<br />
&#8220;Your parents were killed, by 4 North East Asians, they were travelling along the Silk Road, when it happened,<br />
I dont know why they were killed, but they were. Im sorry&#8221; and That was the first time i had seen him so serious,<br />
i could tell he was serious by the look on his face, his soft &#8220;painted&#8221; brow, was tight and twisted, his swarv smile,<br />
had turn to a tightly squeezed thin line, and his hands were clenched as if he were about to punch something, or someone.</p>
<p>All the other questions would have to wait, and as we walked to the top of the mountin side,<br />
the sun hit his skin,and as it did it shined like diamonds, he showed me what he was and said,<br />
&#8220;Like father, like child, you are now, what i have shown you.&#8221;</p>
<p>He took me to his holiday house in Pheonix, and introduced me to the rest of the family,<br />
and just like me, his other children were all adopted. There was Raven, Elizabeth, Carmella, and Justin.<br />
Dr.Rinsdale, insisted that i called him, William, and His Wife, My new adoptive mother, Olivia.<br />
My New Family was Just like William, and just like me, and so as all the introductions had all been made,<br />
with this being the bignning of my new family, we caught the first flight out of Pheonix to New York City.</p>
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<p>  CHAPTER 3<br />
Last Night Was The Longest Night of My Life,<br />
I did not sleep at all, none of us did,<br />
we were on the flight to New York, and everyone on the plane was alseep except for us,<br />
I wanted to ask questions, but I didnt.<br />
I smelt the smell again, the one I had smelt in the hospital,<br />
again I had that craving, William saw the look in my eyes,<br />
and he knew what was about to happen, it was like esctasy,<br />
my eyes your dilating,<br />
everything was becomeing a blur,<br />
and I fealt a sharp pain in my mouth,<br />
like William had said two of my top-front teeth had grown to a point.</p>
<p>The Rinsdale&#8217;s, kept me undercontrol, in the cargo room, so I did not attack anything or anyone.<br />
Things were becoming strange again,<br />
and I started to see things, things not in the cargo room,<br />
things not even of this time.<br />
The Craving was becoming worse,<br />
and there was nothing we could do about it.<br />
All we could do was wish that we could keep it undercontrol, and only time would be able to tell if we could.<br />
William, had created another monster, like his son had said, and now even he was scared.</p>
<p>Justin pulled William aside, and even though things were blurry,<br />
i could still hear them perfectly clear, as if they were still right beside me,<br />
&#8220;You see what you have done now father, she&#8217;s seeing the future,<br />
she&#8217;s going insane, she can smell the boy&#8217;s blood,<br />
she&#8217;s gonna bite, and when she dose like i said in the hospital father,<br />
our family will have an uproar on our hands.&#8221; Justin was now yelling.</p>
<p>&#8220;Son, If me and your mother can, keep you and your sister&#8217;s undercontroll, we can keep Jasmine under controll as well,<br />
We are Rinsdale&#8217;s we are survivors, we are fighters,&#8230;&#8221; but before William could finish, Justin commeted,<br />
&#8220;Thats what im afraid of&#8221;. and as he said that, they all realized the reality of the situation on their hands,<br />
They had to keep me undercontroll for 1 more hour, the only question is &#8216;is it possible to do just that&#8217;, they were all thinking the same thing,<br />
we should have stayed in Pheonix just a bitter longer, so that i would be more easily controllable, but with hundreds of thousands of people on board,<br />
and only one calling my name, would it be possible to keep them all safe?</p>
<p>It was just under 30 minuets to New York City, when i had my first glimps into the future,<br />
i saw our family being chased by a boy who had 8 of everything, he was what some might call a slayer.<br />
&#8220;S-s-s-slayer&#8221; i blurted out, while our whole family was fighting, over the yelling and arguing they, somehow, had all heard me.<br />
They come like the speed of light, to hear what i had to say, so i said it again<br />
&#8220;Slayer!&#8221; more firmly this time, and they were asking all types of question&#8217;s,<br />
&#8216;where?&#8217;, &#8216;who?&#8217;, &#8216;what did they look like?&#8217;, so i answered their questions,<br />
&#8220;a boy, on the plane, about mine and justin&#8217;s age, tanned, tall, and very firm looking, he call&#8217;s himself &#8216;Justice&#8217;&#8221;<br />
Olivia remembered the one thing they all forgot, because she was the only one who had ever really experienced it, the smell of a slayers blood gave one of us,<br />
the effects i had earlier on in the plane, the dilating pubils, the ecstasy feeling that i had, was caused from the slayers blood,<br />
even though they were all scared, only Olivia was petrified, because only she knew the full meaning of the situation now.<br />
&#8220;We gotta get off this plane now William, we cant leave anything up to chance, he&#8217;s coming after her,<br />
but if he finds all of us, then we are all doomed.&#8221; Olivia was gental, scared, but the tone of her voice was strong, and firm like a dictator.<br />
&#8220;Alright everyone you heard you&#8217;re mother, we gotta fly. However someone&#8217;s gonna have to carry Jasmine, she hasn&#8217;t developed her full abilities just yet,<br />
but they are developing fast. Justin i want you to carry her, she need&#8217;s your protection, your the strongest out of us, and you&#8217;ll be able to protect her angainst the slayer.<br />
&#8220;Alright father, but only because we could all get hurt if we dont do this fast. Get on Jasmine, were going for a ride.&#8221;<br />
So I got on his back, we jumped out of a whole in the cargo room, it was exciting, it was fast, and he was absolutely charming, sensitive, and protective.<br />
However i told myself to get over it, i was crushing on my own brother, but never had i meet anyone like Justin before, he was the Prince of Darkness,<br />
but he was really nice, for someone so dark. So i just reasted on his back on the long ride home to New York city.</p>
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